Shelby

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3rd grade poem

Worms and guts anything in the world to make mom go yuck! i smash it and part it then movie it through my feet makes me smile and the girls run mile water and grass a little stick to stir i know i can make moms favorite dessert a handful of grass and all the dogs water then the hole the dog to get out and wonder i mix and i mash to make it flash my cake is almost complete mom will dash to get her drink when she finds out what is in her favorite treat

Dream Poem

Dragons and fire all my desire what else do i need to fulfill my dreams? steam and me a little more mean bad names and scary music to make you feel clueless while you fall soundlessly asleep where your dreams turn to meat where you'll be my dragons favorite treat while he goes out to tricker-treat.

Doilet oh NO Doilet he fell in the toilet now his butt will be soiled HURRY! unfasten unfasten before his pants fall down and he makes it hit the ground oh man there is a stain moms heart will pop a vein when she can't get it out with SHOUT! about time Doilet is done he flushes the toilet and washes his hands and then yells MOM ALL DONE!

Red white and blue not always is the sky painted blue and the grass painted green once and a while the world makes me want to scream i don't agree how bush solves things i don't agree how we say things that are mean people are fighting for "respect" and all were getting is wrecked we need to change things we do and say how can we do that when some people don't want to change?